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Nov 13, 2015

John the Caterpillar by Mateo Buenconsejo Grade 2-Fortitude



(Following is the edited version by me. He loves the word "and.") 

John the Caterpillar

by Mateo Buenconsejo
Grade 2-Fortitude


One day, there is a caterpillar, and it’s name is John. 

John is happy looking at the butterflies flying from one flower to another. He wonders how he can become a butterfly.

He asks a butterfly, "How can I be like you?"
The butterfly says, "Easy! You just need to eat leaf."
And, John says," I don't like leaf. I only eat candy."
And butterfly says, "Never mind."
And John crawls away.

And John still eats candy.

One day, John thinks of eating a leaf.
And John eat a leaf.
And john says, "Wow that was tasty good.”

One day, John eats a lot of leaf, and he falls asleep.

One day, John turns to a butterfly.
And John wake up, and John looking at his body.
And John says, "Wow I look beautiful and I see my wings.”

And he fly fly to his friends.

The End

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